RE-WRITE:
what has become of a mankind
simple animals with desire
unaware of their unsatiable character
with uncontrollable needs
The queues for comfort
are leading us towards death
making us leave no mark
and be selfish instead
what has been left of a man
only a fraction of himself
the unnatural species
already lost in the whirl of technology
we are asking for what we dont deserve
and what we never achieve
once we had comfort
but we wasted our families
what has become celebrated
substituted love
and smashed what held us together
throughout the dark ages
what has become cherished
is only abandoned compassion
fondness for unimportant necessities
and complacency that restrains
seeing the important
seeing what should be real
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